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Canon
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Canon EOS 350D DIGITAL
Shutter Speed
1/400 second
Aperture
F/1.8
Focal Length
50 mm
ISO Speed
1600
Date Taken
Jul 8, 2010, 8:14:40 PM
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Red and Green on White by HMSpeedFreek Red and Green on White by HMSpeedFreek
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noir-septembre Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2010
forgot to add: but overall great composition, I really like the color scheme as well!!
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HMSpeedFreek Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2010
Thanks :)
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noir-septembre Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2010
Maybe have like a big board covered in aluminum paper, and put in in a way to reflect the light on the shadow of the object? I'd also turn up the aperture, it needs a greater focus (if you want to keep the small aperture, get closer and have bokeh on it)

Not trying to be an ass, just trying to give good critique =p
But you know that : >
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HMSpeedFreek Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2010
A reflector would be useful methinks - if not for general lightening, but also as a flash reflector. Your suggestion is to remove the shadow, or just lighten it up a bit? The shadow was one thing I liked about it - the tints of red and the dark blues in it as well. But yeah, focus leaves something to be desired, and a more stable position might've been useful too so I could take the ISO down a notch

Love the crit ;)
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noir-septembre Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2010
sweet! To lighten up the shadow, mainly. did you use a tripod?
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HMSpeedFreek Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2010
I didn't use a tripod in this case; hence the high ISO and shutter so it wouldn't blur our
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iHeartRufus Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
It's like Christmas in the Summer time. Nice colours on the white.. actually not white at all.. I love that.
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HMSpeedFreek Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2010
:D
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